Lizette

Hello! I like it how you have written your poem. :) It shows how you marvel the stars at the universe and how amazed you are on their enchanting beauty. ...

My Sweet Love, please be by my side. Let the fears of this fragile heart subside. My Precious Dear, please tap my shoulder. Teach my spirit to be firm and ...

I think you want to go back at Your First Love yet you are torn apart. You want to give the pen of your life to the Great Author yet ...

Your poem reflects what your heart really feels. Its vivid descriptions help us to get a glimpse at your soul. Keep on writing! God bless you.

Thank you for sharing your work. It's a gem! I mean it. :) God bless!

You're a great writer. :) For me, your poem speaks about freedom in the midst of shackles that tends to hinder the speaker to be himself. It's like the speaker ...

Hello! I love the simplicity of your poem. Simple yet it strikes to the core. Blessings! :)

I like your poem very much! :) I'll be waiting for your next one. :D

If I were to write a love song I will tell the world of You If I were to make a sonnet I will declare Your wonders If I were ...