Livinginfantasy

Well, you PMed me and said you had something up, and that I didn't have to read it or anything... But c'mon, did you really expect not to read it? ...

I. A very good poem indeed. No need to sound like a broken record; angels-symphony's hit all the spots. Except the part about the boy not sounding eight; in my ...

It was just as dark and colorless on the inside as it was on the outside, just like a faded painting. Awesome description. I've noticed that you always have that ...

Hiya! I hope you've realized by now that when you send me a PM I don't reply as fast as I'm sure you'd want me to. But have no fear, ...

Where do you come up with this stuff?! Just one flaw, Dream. Give me just one thing to pick at and exaggerate and exploit, and then I'll feel like I'm ...

I kept my promise! Although the "jiffy" part in my PM that other day was a little... extreme. :roll: Anyway, I caught up, and now I'm on the wonderful chapter ...

Very very nice! Just a few things though... Eyebrows knit together, And biting my fingernails. I'm burnt and I'm bruised, But I know I can't fail Good imagery... but do ...

The sunset creates a halo on your hair The pieces of my heart shed on my face My heart is a filthy reminder of love lost Of laughs shattered And ...

Yeah yeah, I know what you're thinking: LIF, I've asked you to review ages ago! What the heck was your lazy butt doing! I don't know either... After eating the ...

You just got another fan. Gotta love that MC... he sounds pretty hot, too. I've got a question for you: How do you feel about people posting here and not ...

The slow, intense sweeping of your lips across mine. Your neck, my tongue. The brushing of your material against my skirt. My fingers twisted in your hair, gripping. Your hands ...

Ivory!!! Yes! I knew she was coming back! I just knew it! Now the picture in my crystal ball is starting to get clearer; I'm starting to see that Ivory ...

That was so beautiful! I'm sorry, I have no crit, just praise. But I do have a question: Like Angel of Death was saying, what is your MC dying of? ...

Why am I destined to save you, When you couldn’t save me, Wouldn’t save me… I was drowning but on my own, Me, I’m pulling you out of the water… ...

Haha, oh Light_Devil... I must admit, I was one of the people who read this and didn't review, but not because I'm against gay couples (though my parents say I ...