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Re: Now That You Have Destroyed Me
I don't pretend to be a great expert on poetry, but I love to read it. So here is an opion from a more "consumer-like" person. To me, it lacked ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: A Gray Delivery
Hmm ... a little confusing, but I liked it! There was few messages that I found in there. For example: obseity, anti-socialism, today's soceity. All in all, it was a ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Why?
Your poem had a nice flow to it. For the next time, try to add some metaphors to it, to lengthen your work and really make the reader go "wow!" ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: pavements
Wow ... I loved your use of of words and metaphors. It made for a truely beautiful poem. I just want to say that I do think you need some ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Would You Like a Cookie?
Very well done. I do have to admit, I had to read the last paragraphs a second time to understand. Once I did, they blew me away. What an ending! ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Past the Horizon
It was a day that had been blessed in good fortune. I smiled happily, how could I feel any other way during a day as ideal as this, warmed by ...
Nov 26, 2011