LiverTeaTime

Hi. :D I'm working on a novel, it's a Fantasy/perhaps bordering sci-fi eventually...I love constructive criticism, so go at it. I have the first two chapters up at the current ...

I can't say I've ever seen the musical itself in person, but I do enjoy the novel of it. Well, I mean, what I've read of it so far. I'm ...

Herp, I clicked on the second picture and didn't scroll and assumed the other body was one long tail. ...Derp? Erm, my eyes are closed in this but it's my ...

A Briefcase Full of Guts- ((Dethklok)) But why is the rum gone?

Thank you for the review. ^.^ I hope I can reveal it more easily as it goes on. If it interests you, I added a second chapter last night.

Hihi. everything seemed to fall apart by the seems. I'm pretty sure it's 'seams' rather than 'seems' in this particular usage. :) I have always lived here in the sunny ...

Aweee, poor ant. The point of view was a good one, and this certainly was an enjoyable read. :) I couldn't really find any grammatical errors. Overall, good job!

How I tend to work my dialogue is I, as mentioned before in this thread, read out loud to myself. Or, if that still doesn't quite help me, I just ...

A/N: This is a bit of longer chapter, so I'll be separating it into...perhaps two chunks? I hope you're happy with yourself. My vision's foggy, but already my mind is ...

Thanks for commenting. :) I suppose I should have separated this chapter into chunks on here...I think that would be best for me to do with the next chapter and ...

Hihi. I found your novel by browsing through the 'Novels & Novellas' page. The main reason I picked yours was because of your synopsis, which stood out. :) Anyways, to ...

Thank you for the review! To be honest, compared to my last attempted (but in the end failed) novel, the description in this is rather cut down. But would make ...

Hihi. :) I met Natasha when we were in the third grade. I had just turned nine. I remember being jealous because Natasha had been nine for a whole 6 ...

Sarebear seems to have already handled the grammatical and spelling aspects well, so I'm just going to go on to my overall feel of the piece. :) For the most ...

It would be awesome if you could check mine out. :D