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Re: Family Problems
The detail was great, the words were real, and the emtion was amazing. The only question that comes to mind is how you can write that without crying? It was ...
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Re: Pain
Pain is short but very good. I loved the first line " Pain is the promise of tomorrow" because it is so true. But the last two lines sound a ...
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Re: One Last Song
I like it. It was sweet and cute. the only thing i would change about it is a little more detail. i wish u would have told us what the ...
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Re: Charlie Manning
This is a kinds random piece that I wrote and I'm not sure what to do with it. Seven years ago Sweat poured down my face as I climbed the ...
Aug 12, 2010
