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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Family Problems

    The detail was great, the words were real, and the emtion was amazing. The only question that comes to mind is how you can write that without crying? It was ...

    Aug 12, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Pain

    Pain is short but very good. I loved the first line " Pain is the promise of tomorrow" because it is so true. But the last two lines sound a ...

    Aug 12, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: One Last Song

    I like it. It was sweet and cute. the only thing i would change about it is a little more detail. i wish u would have told us what the ...

    Aug 12, 2010
  • Other Re: Charlie Manning

    This is a kinds random piece that I wrote and I'm not sure what to do with it. Seven years ago Sweat poured down my face as I climbed the ...

    Aug 12, 2010


When one is highly alert to language, then nearly everything begs to be a poem.
— James Tate