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I know this story is really short but tell me what you think. Jesse stared at the papers that hid his desk away. All this work and he still couldn't ...

I love Letters from Luke. That's all that can be said. I didn't see anything wrong with it and love every moment. Please go on with this story. It's to0 ...

I really liked your piece, it was sad and sweet. The only thing I would say needs some improvement is maybe a little back ground. Why does she love him? ...

I'd your story up to "your beautiful." You have to be a little more realistic. Most guys don't just go up to a random girl and tell her she's beautiful. ...

I like the story. And in some small way I understand too. I mean I'm a year away from being 16,but every year since I was like 12 I thought ...

Don't delete it. It's a good story and even though someone told you should change some stuff in it doesn't make it bad. I liked it. I agree that you ...

That was so sad! I wanted to yell at you for making it end that way! It would have been different if the guy had been a jerk. But that ...

Though the open window Else could see the clear night sky and feel the cold breeze. How she longed to leave this place. It felt like only a few days ...

I love reading your story, it was totally amazing. There were a few grammer problems like when you called jake jesse, but other than that it was perfect.

I really liked your story, but there is one thing that kind of bothers me. The fight with Aaron and Toby. I think you should have had them try to ...

It's amazing all the way. I would hate to find out what life would be like without my passion.

I really like the poem just for thhe fact that it shows what someone is thinking about before they cut themselfs and i never understood why people do that. Anyways ...

I love how you did all of this. It was different and cool. Keep writing.

It is insanely good. That's the only way to put it.

LadyPurple, First, thanks for your input. I'm really bad at spelling so that might explain all the mistakes. And I wasn't trying for a cliff hanger its just were I ...