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Re: Love and Hate
Hey you guys. I'm so sorry cuz I guess I put this story in the wrong thing. I didnt mean for this to be a book. If so it would ...
Sep 24, 2010 -
Re: Ever Changing
The navy black sky shined with millions and millions of stars as I got into Charlie and Melissa’s car. It was sad to think that such a beautiful night like ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Rain and Lightening
I knew its really short, but I was bored, it was raining out, I had to do something. This is what I came up with so, tear it to pieces ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [10]
Hey Pink, I have to say I was a little disappointed. There wasn't much there. I think you should go into more detail at the beach. Give us a glance ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: If we only had more time...
I have to say, I loved the plot of your story. It's different. I'm sure many people can relate, because everyone has a friend or love that their friends don't ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 4
I am so falling in love with your story. Please come up with another chapter soon. Keep Writing! Sierra :mrgreen:
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 3
Ok let just say that I loved the fact that Alicia ran off right after she kissed Liam. Most girls wouldn't have the guts to do that. As for nitpicking, ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [9]
No! No! No! I so don't understand! Why did you let her forgive him??? Why did you make her act so ok with everything that just happened??? WHY???????? But it ...
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: Light and Darkness
I have to say I love your writing and ideas, if it's yours. I'm not trying to mean or anything, but have you ever read The House of Night series? ...
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: What Sarah Said
Let me just say that I loved that you did a gay love story. I hate people that freak out over it, because you can't tell someone who to love, ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: Snarling Thunder
This was really good. I'm not going to nitpick, so no worries. I leave that in the hands of the pros. Don't have much to say other than that. Just ...
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: The Cost of Love
Liz is such a bad, bad girl. Lol. I like that all she could feel was guilt about what just happened. The story was really good, there's nothing to ask, ...
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [8]
First I have to say that I was so scared for Lillah. I love your story and want to cry every time it ends. This is amazing in every way ...
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: Serial Killer
Wow. This was pretty interesting. It was good, no doubt. And very different. I loved reading your story, because it was so well written. But there is some work. Nitpicking, ...
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [7]
Oh my god!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story and if you don't write another chapter I'm going to go crazy!!!!!!! There's nothing else to say. Please hurry on with the next ...
Sep 6, 2010
