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I stared at the girl in the mirror, she didn’t look any different. She still had thin, long blond hair, pulled back into a ponytail, just like every other day. ...

I think this was a very good story. I like how you brought the bible into the whole thing too. I'm not that good with nitpicking, so I'll leave that ...

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was a great story. I hate that you didnt give us any background info, but it makes the reader want to read on. I agree with Grabriella that ...

Beautiful. I love your story. It's sweet from beginning to end. I think what I love most is the pure innocents of the little girl, and the fact that she ...

Twilight was the first thing I thought of when I saw your title. It seems like everyone is obsessed with the thing. (I honestly liked Vampires sucks a lot better.) ...

This is really short, but good. It sounds like it would be a good beginning to a story or even a good ending. I hate how it leave you with ...

This was kinda odd, but in a good way. It does seem more like a poem, but I understand what your trying to do. Or at lest I think I ...

I like your story. When most women have this kinda of problem, they just can't walk away. It's powerful, sad, and sweet. The writing is good and I hope to ...

Good story. I like the message. I'm not a nitpicker as I've told many people, so I can't help you there. It did get a little confusing at the end ...

Wow. It's a nice twist I can say that much. I got so creeped when Nye asked him to slap her across the face. Good job and keep writing! Sierra ...

Holy crap, short! lol. I like it, but hate that you ended it like that! It only makes me want more! Keep writing! Sierra :mrgreen:

It was good, but I kinda agree with WickedWonder. I think you kinda shoved in the whole thing about werewolves. Maybe have Liam fighting with Cole about it and then ...

This is a really good story. I liked it alot. I loved how you started it along with the way it ended. Everything I was going to ask you about ...

Hey Kaedee, This is good. Different too. I like the fact that A.) a dork and a barbie (as you put it) are together. And B that the dork dumped ...

Hey Pink, I loved it. And just so we're clear I loved it last time too, I guess I just thought it would be more dramatic so I was a ...