Little_Krainie_Girl

I really liked it--nice imagery, nice topic, good word choice. I think it's a really sweet idea. The poem captures the girl's innocence and child-likeness really well--keep it up and ...

:D Bravo, my friend. Bravo. :D You got talent, dude. For serious. PM me when you have something new 'cause I'd love to read it.

That was really sweet. There were a few typos... the sight of me , but.... -- take the space out The are steadfast --They? Sticking their tough out...--tongues? “I have ...

That was beautiful and heartbreaking.

Could I bother you to explain the poem's meaning for me? I thought it was fairly clear but reading the others' opinions got me curious as to what your thoughts ...

I like your style, too, nate.b! It's hard for me to get stuff on paper so I can really appreciate it when other people can. I think my favorite part ...

Oops! Sry, didn't read your last post. Too bad about the B+...I bet it would have gotten an A if you'd stuck to the topic. Anyway, the writing part was ...

I have one tiny nitpick with this one but I'm not sure what I'd do to rectify it. (Sry!) The part where she mentions her favorite show...that's a little odd. ...

Oh wow! I haven't read the Animal Ark books in forever! hehe! A really good fiction book is "Before Midnight" by Cameron Dokey. It's really neat!

I really, really loved it. I think the rythem is good, the thought behind it is awesome and I really don't have a huge problem with the rhyming, either. Maybe ...

I wish I could give you some constructive criticism but I really can't. There must be something that could be improved (always room for that, right?) but I'm not good ...

First off, I think it's really great that you were able to post this. Art in any from is really the artist creating something that showcases their soul. I don't ...

I know very little about poetry. Now, with that said, I may share my very uneducated opinion with a clear conscience. :) I love it. Mostly, I love the theme. ...