LittleMiss

This was interesting. A little confusing, but I think I got the gist of it (I might read it again, just to make sure.)

Interesting word... does it have anything to do with the latin form of language? the 'catat' have a meaning in latin? Just curious.

This sems like it has a little bit of potential, but it needs revision. It just didn't flow very well, and only kept my interest into the first paragraph. But ...

This was pretty nice. I think it could use a tad more fluency... but I'm not really a lyric-writing person, so I always have trouble finding the exact problems. I ...

For some reason the way this is written makes me think it was from the future... I don't know why, it just seems like a future-space-techno poem, if that makes ...

I thought this was supposed to be poetry of some sort... I don't get it. :P