LittleMiss

This was interesting. A little confusing, but I think I got the gist of it (I might read it again, just to make sure.)

Interesting word... does it have anything to do with the latin form of language? the 'catat' have a meaning in latin? Just curious.

I liked it... but... Why did it only rhyme for the first few lines? I liked the rhyming, and then it disappeared! Also, there should probably be quotation marks here: ...

This sems like it has a little bit of potential, but it needs revision. It just didn't flow very well, and only kept my interest into the first paragraph. But ...

I stumbled forward through a tangle of vines, and took another glance around the lush forest, hoping to push a surge of renaissance. Something was too familiar about the thorn ...

This was pretty nice. I think it could use a tad more fluency... but I'm not really a lyric-writing person, so I always have trouble finding the exact problems. I ...

I'm not really one to judge lyrics (I'm a short-story and novel writer) but this seemed pretty good! I judged it from a poem-standard, because I know a little about ...

For some reason the way this is written makes me think it was from the future... I don't know why, it just seems like a future-space-techno poem, if that makes ...

This is really neat! It makes me curious about the novel you designed it for... the title, and the image! :)

I thought this was supposed to be poetry of some sort... I don't get it. :P

This was pretty cute! I liked it... and it seemed to have good fluency. One thing that popped out at me though, "Not what you want to have to choose ...