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Re: Live in the moment
I really love the way you describe the character in your story, really innocent. This story is really powerful in some sense, with a great plot. I like the part ...
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: If the World Could Only Love Me Chapter 1 Part 2/2
Hey, Gravity this is a review from LH Haha, This is an interesting story. I like the part where you mention your name gives me this mysterious feel, and how ...
Nov 4, 2013 -
Re: Boys.
Hey GreenLight24, LH here The dialogue that is going in there is really interesting. Made me feel like I am there during the conversation. Overall it is a wonderful piece ...
Oct 29, 2013 -
Re: Caped
I love how the poem use everyday life as an example. Makes me feel like I want to take my curtain right now and use it as a cape! Really ...
Oct 29, 2013 -
Re: LAPIS :Chapter 8:
Hey there, LH here :) well I am new here so ^>^ I didn't read the past chapters so I am not clear of what is going on around this ...
Oct 28, 2013