LittleBitCold

No next chapter yet? I'm sad. I want more pwetty badly...HOW CAN YOU END SO------cliff-hangerish?? If you weren't my friend I wouldnt be beating you up. But I need more. ...

WOW. Wowwowowowowowowowow. That's all I can say.....haha! I always have something to say! Soooo, I love it that Yel and Jason are back, i was so mad when Jason disappeared ...

WHAT!!?? what what what what!!!??? Noone else has reviewed?!?! Absolutely stupid. >> Gosh, this was amazing....i'm afraid my stories have TOO much down time but yours just NEVER stop moving!! ...

Yay! More reviews. THANKS. I will let you guys know--at least the guys that asked--when the next chapter is up. But I'm off the pc for a week so it ...

Thanks for the reviews guys! I am editing this alot but I will let you know when I put more on. I know it was a little confusing and that ...

.....Wow. That was sooooo good. Delys is completely amazing and I love him. I have to disagree with Chern...sociopaths NEVER get boring...*cough* sprite *cough* I think the language in this ...

Chap. 5-------------I'm worried about this one. Does it fit the rest of the story? ******* Alicia awoke to harsh light and distant sobbing. She rolled over; thoughts, dreams and reality ...

Chapter 4...hope its better than the last... ***** ‘Okay! Here I come!’ Alicia raced down the stairs, slipping through the sitting room and accidentally finding what was probably supposed to ...

Thanks everybody for reviewing!!!! All of your advice was very helpful. I MAJORYLY edited the third chapter and I hope it's better. The fourth should be up soon. Thanks again!!!!

Chapter 3...please tell me if it's awful or not!!! ***** Looking out a door and seeing something that shouldn’t exist is one of those things that doesn’t happen very often. ...

You edited it!!!! I think it's better...although I thought it was awesome at first!!! I think you made Raymond less girly in this version...although I didn;t mind him being a ...

Here is chapter 2...let me know what you think!!!! ****** Ice like frozen dreams tore at her lungs as she ran and tears fought to escape. It wasn‘t until her ...