LiteraryAdmirer99

The story has been really well written and I liked it. The only thing was that it pretty much scared me when i first saw how long it was. The ...

Hey. Just like snazzy said the part isn't exactly following the rhyme scheme of the poem. Other than that I think it is pretty well written and I can totally ...

You've already mentioned that tgis was something you had written quickly, it'd have been really nice if you'd have guven us more insight into what the person's achievements actually were ...

I loved reading this. Although I'm relatively very new to this site, this is one of the good ones that I've read so far. The way in which you've expressed ...