Litehawk

Harry Potter. It taught me with determination, I can slay voldemort with my magic... Now I just need to find those horcruxes

Seems more like a song doesn't it? It just has that feel to it... I give it a gold star, it was pretty deep. I agree that line "Scarred you ...

Sorry, this happens every time, I guess I'm not clear enough, but the last little bit of the story is me telling you thatthw girl and her dance were personifications ...

Woah, ease up on the comma button, and I think it would flow much more smoothly. I know sometimes it's hard to quite get punctuation right because you might read ...

Thanks, I fixed the punctuation and the bad adjective. I agree it was kinda a poor word choice.

It was because he won so much they just decided not to pay attention to him when he played, instead they just decided who won amongst their own results, discluding ...

Actually Grif, the poem is not about gambling but about debating, and how nobody listened to my arguments, and how I would keep on fighting.. And yeah... That'd why I ...

When you say you don your rubber glove... Are you saying you want to have sex with fruit o.O

I think he did write one poem on here. I like the twist at the end, I always love a bit of irony. Phillip K. Dick was amazing at that. ...

there are 8 billion people already?! GUYS STOP MAKING BABIES!!! It was a very good idea, it didn't really flow too much... But the concept was good, not original