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I loved reading this Bear! This was good! And a random thought - I don't think this is where I die, but it's good anyway! Even if I didn't die. ...

HaHaHaHaHaHa... Ok, give me a minute to breathe. Okay, I'm good. That was funny! Author: (thinks) But wait! You're supposed. . . you're not supposed to be talking! Character: If ...

Hi there! I liked reading this post! Didn't find any grammar mistakes either. :D Good job with that! One thing that bothered me throughout the whole post, is that we ...

Well, I didn't read the first ones (at least, I don't think I did) but I thought this was pretty good! Here's a couple of things I caught. “Don’t pretend ...

Hi and welcome to YWS! I really liked this piece. It was good. :D One of the rules here on YWS is to do two reviews before you post anything ...

HaHa. Good job with the volleyball description. I've read a lot of things that tried involving volleyball, but they described it wrong. You did it right! Good job! I couldn't ...

HaHa. Good job! I really liked this. There were a couple of things throughout here that I want to point out. “Mam.” I bobbed my head towards his date. Mam ...

I liked this a lot! I felt exactly what she was feeling. The time you leave the nest and go off to college. Good job! Some things I saw: In ...

Wow. This was really good. I enjoyed reading this very much. I laughed about a million times while I was reading this. Good job! If I were to die, and ...

Oh, two days later.... Some parts in here confused me because you put them speaking on the next line, and you didn't say that they were. For example: I sat ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS! One important rule here on YWS is that you need to do two reviews before you post anything of your own. It helps other ...

I liked this a lot. I get what you mean here. That's also amazing that you got to see something like that. It was well written too. I hope you ...

Ooooh. Melody likes Nathan, but all three like Melody. Ooohhh. I sense heartbreak in many many chapters. But that is in the future, and I want to focus here. I ...

Wow. Shelby clone? I like it. :D Sounds exactly like a person like Helen would say. Good job. “You’re recognise you, you hang out with Shelby and the other two ...

You are good Meep. Truly. I liked this chapter, and I agree with you. It is uneventful. ^_^ “Mom, I’m back!” I hollered up the stair where my other was ...