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Re: Sincerely, X [Chapter 1]
It was good. Very good, I liked it. Now, getting down to business. When I first starting reading this, and I read about the pack, I thought "Oh, cool. Werewolves. ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: Pure of Heart ^_^
I think it was really good. :D It flowed smoothly and was a really good prolouge. I bet you have a really good ideas for this, so I can't wait ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Cynic
Hey. That was good!! I am not really that good of a editor. so I will try my best! :D Many times in the first part, you capitalized sub . ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: angel from ashes
Alright, I stink at editing. The only things I can really catch while reading a story, is if an obvious word is spelled wrong. Trust me, I do it in ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: angels from ashes
That was pretty good, peanut for your first time. Lol, yeah. it might be a good idea to slow it down a bit when you edit it. Yes, I finally ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: The America Project
I like it. I don't know if you meant this, but I noticed you didn't reveal much about the characters and keeping alot of it a mystery. It sets up ...
Oct 6, 2008