Lini-chan

I'll try to describe the background more in the next draft. Thanks for the advice!

Hi and welcome! I'm relatively new too! My name is Lini, pleased to meet you! Among my countless artistic preoccupations you would find: anime and manga (which had the counter ...

Hey and welcome! Lol I wish I knew Russian. Ich spreche Deustch(I speak German), though!

Hey, I'm a soph too! Glad to see you here! I'm new, and I already love the place.

Chapter One From the beginning, I heard it in my head. It was a strange sound I could never fully identify, so alien it was to me. Cascading waterfalls of ...

I read it, and I thought it was okay...but it could use some improvement. I liked the idea of describing a war zone (which is what I think you were ...

I write lyrics too. And the good thing about lyrics is that they're easier to set to music. Just write whatever kind of poetry you're good with most of the ...

A spot of light in the endless black [...] Blinding light it does not lack Your poem(s) had a lot of rather forced rhyming, but I thought this pair was ...

The darkness was what came before creation (i.e. the universe before the Big Bang happened was pretty much nothingness [which is the only way you could describe an utter lack ...

All is silent in the dark abyss Save for one small speck of shining light Rushing forward with a roiling hiss Like a phoenix in its fiery flight Stars and ...

Thanks so much for reading it!! I'm glad to hear you liked it!! -Save-Ferris-, you're right. Mercury was the hardest thing for me to think about things to write for ...

Sun A spot of light in the endless black Brilliant oranges, reds, and golds Blinding light it does not lack Sprung from the darkness in the ages of old A ...

It's a good poem, and descriptive, but there's some things I think could be improved. I don't quite understand this line: Just my paddle and I, the giggling wake behind ...

I enjoyed it quite a lot. You described what a tornado is like quite well (I watch the Weather Channel for pleasure, so I've seen a lot of footage). Wiggy ...

Hello!! I'm new too! I think we both will like it here!