LindseyBrooke

Hiya! Suddenly , something caught his eye and he staggered back onto the rocks[s],[/s] . H e had thought he was alone, but found that he was not. Her long ...

Hello! I dreamed the most beautiful of dreams. My love, you were there too. I don't know. This sentence seems a little off. Maybe say something like, "I dreamed the ...

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1. My writing journal is next to me 2. Music is on 3. The room has to be completely empty and no one can bother me 4. The sun has ...

Thirteen Reasons Why by Jay Asher. It may not have been the best writing one might have seen, but the story is so touching. It's a depressing book, but Jay ...

Hello! My name is Lindsey! There's not much really to say, since the instructors have already informed you. But, I have to agree with Jiggity, your name is just so ...

Hello Claire! My name is Lindsey! Welcome to YWS! I think everyone has pretty much informed you already about the site, so there's really not much to say. Do you ...

LovableLittleSock- I'm interested in creating animation. It seems like a lot of fun =] Oh and I am sorry about the posting thing. I just posted three reviews right now, ...

Hello! I just want to say welcome to YWS and point out a couple things. When you post a story or chapter, you have to review at least two other ...

2nd Chapter! Woot! =] Jen shrugged. “ W ell, I better get to chemistry.” Just capitalize the W. I sat down in the front where everyone usually avoided, just in ...

Hey! A story of the unbreakable bond between two hearts. How is their love unbreakable? Exemplify their love instead of just telling us. Also, you are describing Matthew's personality, but ...

Thanks guys! I will definately use your advice and check out that link. :) Oh and I'm really sorry for not reviewing as much. I'm doing as much as I ...

Hola! I'm actually really impressed because I read the whole thing. =] I really enjoyed this story. There were only a couple things I had problems with. Cathy was a ...

Ok! Thanks! Yeah, I'm working on the chapters of this story so it can make a little more sense. Thanks for the reviews though guys!

Hello! The last day he would [s]every[/s] ever see her smile. But unfortunately today was the last day he would see her unharmed. I didn't quite understand this. Are you ...