LindseyBrooke

See, I didn't know if it would be odd or not.. I was trying to show just the POV of a character whose been tortured and abused by the woman. ...

Thanks Pink for the review! I really appreciate it. I only had a few questions for you to answer based off of your reply. Whenever you get the chance, I ...

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I really appreciate this. I just have one question for Pink or anyone else who wants to help me with this: As for your ...

I seriously love you guys. Thank you so much for reviewing! Haha, I thought I put too much description in it, but I wanted to make sure that the torture ...

Hey Skins! Review my prologue for me? Thank you! (: -Lindsey

Thank you all so much for reviewing! (: Yeah, the paragraphs are a bit long aren't they? Haha, I'll fix it up soon enough. And I want to try and ...

Ah, it seems like you have a lot of reviews pending right now. Whenever you get the chance, take a look at mine please? Title: Comatose Genre: Romantic/Fantasy Thank you! ...

Please review this for me? (: Title: Comatose Genre: Fantasy/Romance (The romance doesn't come until later though so you don't have to worry about that. Just a torture-esque scene. (: ...

Please review? Thank you. (:

Hi everyone, I'm Lindsey. I found this piece a while back and thought I'd continue with the plot line its supposed to be on. I know it's messy and probably ...

Hullo! The name's Lindsey. (; Let's start with the review, shall we? The incredible feeling of the life draining away. This is a fragment. Try to stay away from those. ...

Hi, I'm Lindsey! I'll be quoting the whole story if you don't mind. (: Nelly Miller was seventy five and very, very ill when she sold the property and moved ...

Hi! Please allow me to introduce myself, I'm Lindsey. Haha, so let's begin with the review. I'll start with my nitpicks first. “Don’t be nervous, honey. Everything will be fine ...

Hello! My name is Lindsey and I shall be reviewing your story. (: So, let's begin. He maintained it quite nicely, despite the driver’s seat being a tad broken and ...

Hello! My name is Lindsey and I shall be reviewing your work today! Keep in mind that I'm only trying to help you and make you better! Ok, now I'll ...