LindsayG

The plot thickens.......lol. Okay so first of all, i haven't read the other chapters, this was the only one. And it was totally worth it! Because now i feel i ...

This is was amazing to read! I even had to read it three times! It's deeply moving in that it speaks to your senses and makes you question what you're ...

The story was filled with suspense from beginning to end, and i loved every bit of it, wondering what's going to happen next. The choice of language was very good ...

This is the shortest yet most beautiful short poem i've ever come across. You said so much in so little words...I've got to learn how to do that! I loved ...

That was depply moving, you made me want to be the girl in the poem, even with all the shame. That was super awesome. I loved every part of it! ...

lol, You really should give yourself a lot more credit, its really not that bad. I actually enjoyed it. I thought it was short, humorous and totally sweet...three of my ...

That! In one word was AWESOME! it started out a little slow for me, trying to figure out what the story is about and how the vharacters fit in. But ...

Hey, first off, I'd just like to say that I liked your beginning...straight in the middle of the story, that always a great way to begin. So here are a ...

okay, I'm new to this but I'll try my best. First of all, It feels like i already know some parts of the story but that's okay I'm usually head ...