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Re: This is the End
This is the End. trying to see through the fog just a glimpse of your face your one with the shadows your lost in space... this choice is your own ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: Passion
Razzleberryx, I can see why you are proud of that peice! It was wonderful, the flow was perfect and the message was one I'm sure every writer can relate to!
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: Second Emotions
Hey razzleberryx! Thanks for the input! I'm fairly new at this stuff and I know punctuation has always been my downfall :P
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: Mother Nature's Death
The tears, like blood Fall gently to the floor Unsuspecting, accepting And completely carefree There is no life here The trees have lost their voice The green is no longer ...
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: Second Emotions
Burning in my blood Sparks on my tongue Sweet silence fills the night Looking in your eyes Leaning in close Feeling the heat And loving the moment How could I ...
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: Happily Ever After...maybe
Thanks guys! I will keep working at this! :)
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: Cause: Fight the dark ones
Ok work in progress..thoughts? “Alanna! Are you coming? I swear you have been in the bathroom for twenty minutes, don’t you realize we’re going to be late?” Clary paced the ...
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: The Girl Without Keys
Goldenquill! This is really interesting so far! I can't wait to read more of your work! I couldn't find anything wrong because the only grammatical errors were previously referred to ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Unknown beginnings
Thanks guys! I will definetly take your advice and keep writing! And thank you for the advice, it is very helpful!
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Unknown beginnings
Ok lemme know what you think guys should I continue or no? Where should this story go? Don’t come in here, don’t come in here, don’t… “Marlow! How ya doing ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Happily Ever After...maybe
Once upon a time. Isn’t that how it’s supposed to go? Girl meets boy, girl falls for boy, boy falls for girl, and they live happily ever after. Not in ...
Jun 28, 2010
