Lindabelle

I know I had trouble with the title, I was so eager to post it that I didn't take time on it. Suggestions are welcome however! :)

Thank you very much!

Thanks guys!

Thak you!

Thanks guys! I will take your advice and work on the things mentioned above. Thanks for taking the time to read this over and help me out with my mistakes. ...

Well this poem certainly is dramatic. I'm afraid I must agree with Kyllorac about the use of the F word however. It takes away from the poem's integrity because the ...

I like this one a lot too. It's simple, to the point and it doesn't try to force the message on the reader. Good job!

Not sure how ot take this one to be honest. What is the message? Is there one?

once again helpful hints or thoughts? rain is falling ever so gently like it doesn't really want to moving towards a new place a confused boy in the backseat playing ...

james it is :)

why thank you jamesMarcus! that means a lot :)

Retrodisco666: I love this ! I agree that it does kind of sound like a song but I love the rhythem in it and the message. It's so true of ...

love this! it's so charming! good job

Thoughts? Please be easy on me! don't choose to let the music fade the expression of feelings the fabric of relationships the best of sayings are said for a reason ...

Persephoneia: Thank you! It was one of my earlier peices, I'm still trying to find the proper flow for my poems. I will attempt to broaden my vocabulary in the ...