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Re: A True Dedication
Thanks RedRaven, I'll make note of that and see what I can do :)
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Yellow Plus Red (Contest Entry)
AMAZING! you are such a good writer, I hope you win!
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: A True Dedication
This is for the random contest! “Dear Mom, It has been ages since I last saw you. My work here in Chicago is both rewarding and troubling. It consumes my ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: The Last Dance: Continuation of previous post
Thanks for the review! I changed those things you noticed :)
Jul 15, 2010 -
Re: The Last Dance: Continuation of previous post
Thoughts? Suggestions? Criticisms? :) All is welcome The moment I woke up I knew I would be blinded when I opened my eyes. I could feel the sunlight on my ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: The Last Dance Cont'd
Hey you! I just reviewed your peice right now! Hope you don't think I was too harsh! I really liked it though :)
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Blackout Forever -- Chp. 1-Part 1
Ok first off, LOVE the theme of this story. Really, really good! I’m excited to see what happens next! Hope you don't take my review too harsh! So here’s the ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: The End
Hello! I’m going to be reviewing your piece today because I noticed it doesn’t have a review yet and everyone deserves a review! First off, let me say that I ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: The Last Dance Cont'd
Ok guys here's what I have come up with so far in continuation of the first part of The Last Dance. Criticisms, reviews, suggestions are all welcome! Hope you enjoy! ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: This is the End
Thank you very much! I'm trying my hand at poems, but really I love to write stories, although I have difficulty finishing them :P
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: The Last Dance
Aw thanks guys! I'm currently writing the next part right now! :) I'll be sure to post it ASAP!
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: The Last Dance
Hey TearsOnYourFace! Yeah I'm trying to decide where I want to base this story. I realize England is pretty far-fetched since I have no clue how English people talk. She ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: The Last Dance
Really? Well I feel like once you live someplace for a long time it's hard to understand other mannerisms from other countries. But with some research I shall succeeed! :P ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: The Last Dance
Ok that was such a good review! Seriously! Hey do you have any ideas about where I should set the storyline? I picked England because secretly I want to live ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: The Last Dance
Alrighty, thoughts? Suggestions? Editing? Like it? Hate it? Preface Isn’t it funny how fast things can happen? How fast something that you once thought was your life, can change? Sure, ...
Jul 11, 2010
