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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror
    Re: The Forsaken Race: The Hidden Truth - Chapter 17

    Hi again Raven! Lim here with a review. Initial Thoughts These unknown monsters seem like an interesting element. I wonder if these are related to the ‘big threat’ towards both ...

    Feb 17, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror
    Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 16

    Hi Raven! Lim here with a review. General Thoughts My first impressions are that the demons seem to be arguing about the same things, but that Scorch adds a new ...

    Feb 12, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Literature
    Re: One Quiet Moment

    Hi again! Lim here to review your story. General Impressions The first line starts off gritty and dark, then it transitions quite quickly into a more joyful, victorious atmosphere. There ...

    Feb 5, 2024

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: Love

    Hi there! Lim here to review your story. General Impressions The setting sounds lively and colourful based on the descriptions here. This work almost feels like it might be the ...

    Feb 4, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror
    Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 15

    Hi again Raven! Lim here with a review. General Impressions This chapter left me with a lingering sense of excitement. I like that Kita is seeing more beautiful although dangerous ...

    Jan 31, 2024

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: Cloud Members

    Hi Amaya! Lim here to review your poem! General Impressions The mood of the poem seems fond. The atmosphere created is generally lighthearted or even whimsical. Because of that the ...

    Jan 28, 2024

  • Other » Narrative, General
    Re: One Day

    Hi there Gengar! Lim here with a review. General Impressions The piece leaves me feeling contemplative. The ending makes it somewhat ambiguous who the ‘you’ is – is it the ...

    Jan 27, 2024

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: collection three

    Hi herb! Lim here to review your poems! General impressions across all three These poems come across to me as being slightly mysterious. They don’t go into specifics or locate ...

    Jan 24, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror
    Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 12

    Hi again Raven! General Impressions and Reactions I like that Kita’s lie got a bit better/ more elaborated this time. Looks like it’s still not enough for Leiytning though. My ...

    Jan 21, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror
    Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 11

    Hi Raven! Lim here with a short review! General Impressions This chapter left me feeling curious about the demons’ plans. How would Kita be ‘useful’ to them? The one thing ...

    Jan 18, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror
    Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 10

    Hi again Raven! Lim here with another review. General Impressions I’m somehow not too surprised that Stud is not an ordinary dog. I think maybe it’s the way Kita always ...

    Jan 16, 2024

  • Poetry » Science Fiction, General
    Re: Circular Motion

    Hi mint! Lim here with a short review. Themes and Interpretation My interpretation of the poem is that the speaker starts off feeling stuck, with their dreams “sagging” and feeling ...

    Jan 14, 2024

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Culture
    Re: Righteousness

    Hi there! Lim here with a review. Themes and Interpretation Something I thought was interesting was how your poem deals with emotion. The poem seems to depict martyrdom as a ...

    Jan 12, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror
    Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 9

    Hi Raven! It’s Lim again with a review! General Impressions This chapter had some tense moments and some intriguing moments. I’m left feeling excited that the “dark cloud” in Kita’s ...

    Jan 11, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror
    Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 8

    Hi Raven! Lim here with a short review. General Impressions Hmm this seems slightly ominous. Kita is weaving a web of half-truths. Being able to investigate alone might help her ...

    Jan 3, 2024


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