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Hi Reaper! I’m finally here with a review! General Impressions I like that the Alliance are springing into action even though Duncan has been established as a scary person who ...

Hi mint! It’s Lim again, with another short review. General Impressions Sunny eavesdropped surreptitiously, using a large encyclopedia as cover. I like this specific and fun description! This bit al

Hi mint! Lim here with a short review. General Impressions Ooh, a gang of criminals seemingly looking for fame (?) and with an honour code of some sort. I like ...

Hi sound! Lim here with a review and a little message! I bumped up this chapter and the last to a 16+ rating since it contains discussions of violence and ...

Hi sound! Lim again with a short review. General Impressions Clandestine comes across as still being disoriented here, seeing how she only just remembers Alexander chasing James. The scene where ...

Hi sound! It’s Lim with a short review! General Comments This chapter was intense! The idea of wind wolves spreading fire around is nightmare fuel, but I was stoked that ...

Hi sound! Lim here with a review. General Comments This chapter makes me even more curious about what exactly James did. Did he kill someone? Steal something? Tell a secret ...

Heyo! Lim here with a review. General Comments This was a cute story. I like the unexpected idea that the otherworldly being is actually one of Sophia’s parents, especially with ...

Hi mint! Lim here with a review. General Comments I’m really enjoying seeing more locations in Javaland. The way the library works is so interesting – it feels both magical ...

Hi there Horisun! Lim here with a review. Marsh Something I like about this one is the setting descriptions. I like the idea of the marsh feeling “like another dimension” ...

Hi there! Lim here with a review! General Comments On my first read, the last line was a big ‘aha’ moment. I love the twist that the narrator was a ...

Hi there! Lim here with a review. I’ve read Chapter 7, but thought I’d leave a review on this one instead since it’s still in the Green Room. General Impressions ...

Hello! Lim here with a review. General Comments The beginning of the story has a grim and mysterious atmosphere. It feels like we’re being introduced to a cynical, almost dystopic ...

Hi again Reaper! General Impressions The ending of this chapter certainly leaves an impression. I feel like it conveys a sese of betrayal and also grief over the betrayal, such ...

Hi there GoodieGoat! Lim here with a short review. General Impressions One impression I get from the poem is this feeling of being lost or searching for something. The speaker ...