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Thank you both! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wondered if the last transition between Earth and Narnia was clear enough, so I'll work on improving that. Many thanks.

Thanks guys :) I don't think Lewis ever actually said if Susan got on the train or not, but it's implied that she doesn't die with the rest of her ...

Ah, thanks so much, Meep! Those are some great points.

Well no, not obsessed , but since it's conveniently located in the corner of my browser, I do end up using it often. :P

I never heard of it either. But, from the synopsis on Wikipedia, it looks to be interesting. And it most probably is good, since it's Pullman's... I'll keep an eye ...

Thank you both very much! I changed the bit about the dress. :D

Paintedcookie - *blushes* Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Wiggy - Your guess is as good as mine! :D

Lol! Funny. It made my head hurt a bit. :P But, um... I'm pretty sure people are supposed to post only their own original work.

Hehe, I had a feeling someone would write something like this. :D *dies laughing* Brilliant stuff!

Oh, thank you! ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed it. (I'm actually not planning on writing more of it, though. :oops: ) Yeah, the location and date was a little random... ...

I read the first one... It was pretty good, but as you said it was a little juvenile so I didn't really feel driven to read the rest of them. ...

So sad and funny, lol. But I agree, make it longer! :D

An intriguing, chilling start... Though I agree that the beginning was quite slow and not all that engaging. Maybe trimming down her introspective thoughts would make it a bit better? ...

Jenita - thanks very much! ^_^ Good point about the HP semblance--I didn't even notice. :D Good point about the stains too, I may change that. Glad you liked the ...

Thanks so much, Imp! ^_^ I look forward to it.