Lilyy03

This is great. :D It made me laugh out loud a couple times. One suggestion: When the second frog is kissed, we see it happen from Herbert's point of view, ...

Very intriguing and enjoyable. You did a really good job with the characters--including Soot, poor thing. But, like Don Quixote, for some reason I didn't pick up on the lady ...

This was interesting! I quite liked the way it held to the original in some ways, but was much darker. The Prince's thoughts about the girl were especially well done. ...