Lilyan

Thank you so much C: I might edit it, I might not. Or I will in time. I want to focus on my novel, haha. You were very helpful, though. ...

I adored this piece. It is vague but in a good way. The vagueness makes the story work. I really think it could be a short story in a woman's ...

This was so amazing and a great read. I really adored it. The way you made it, like, I can't explain. But your writing style reminded me of Those Who ...

Hey, everyone. This is the second story I am posting. Now, before you read it I want to tell you guys a couple things. First, I wrote this in the ...

Haha. Their momma died when they were eight. But, like, I'm thinking of the blaming thing. It MIGHT work. Thank you C:

I'm really new to critiquing however, I must say--with a bit of editing and taking all the suggestions of the others--I'm hooked. Really, I have a feeling of why she ...

I didn't watch the video. However, just from reading this I could tell right away your story was based off of 'Traveling Soldier' by the Dixie Chicks. I do have ...

Oh dear, oh gosh, this is my weak point. I love murdering--my characters, silly-- however, I do find it difficult and saddening. In my work-in-progress novel Thought of Irelyn , ...

deleting, needs more work C:

Okay, so, some of you have heard of my in-progress novel Thoughts of Irelyn . It is about twins Irelyn and Ryalnd--here, let me post the synopsis. Warning, I wrote ...

Thanks guys C: Hmm, genres I like? Basically everything. I attempt to branch out. Thoughts of Irelyn, I'm trying a new tense mixed with one I have done before. First ...

I have so much trouble with this. I know to think as if the whole chapter were one big paragraph and try to see if the next part of the ...

Not quite sure. What I've figured out thus far is this: when I was a child I used to play imaginary games with my friends and as I aged, I ...

Thank you C: I already love this forum. It seems really nice. I'm just wondering if my writing is safe here. What I mean is the fact that I'm terrified ...

Hello, everyone. I was just wondering opinions. When you write a story in first person, what is your ideas and takes on using the actual voice of the character. What ...