LilyJamey

Truth is knowing that actually, people pick their nose in public, under the guise of their other hand. What would you do if your cerebral cortex exploded?

I don't mean to be cruel, but seriously, your punctuation is atrocious! Remember to read through your story for punctuation errors. The story wasn't particularly captivating either, maybe because of ...

Erişa Half elves, dragons, fire foxes.. I sighed. My bet was that none were Pelotavan. None of them looked like it, but then, you could never say. Just because their ...

Erişa I felt miserable without the comfortable canopy of trees, the filtered sunlight. After the ruckus in the street, the beggars given kicks for alms, the gamblers blows for loans, ...

Here's mine MSN:

Fortunately I created one exactly like it, and you were banned.

Banned for being a boy.

Name: Erişa (Eri) Alver Age: 15 Gender: Female Race: Has elven origins, but is mostly Pelotavan. Isle of Origin: Crevetia Appearance: 5'6. Light brown hair, almost blond, and chestnut brown ...

1) When did you join YWS? 14th November 2008. Officially, anyway. The next day I attended a jamboree, so it was a week or so before I actually posted. 2) ...

It's really good. I think the man was being unreasonably aggresive. Must be the testosterone. But he paid the price, and now I pity him. Figures. Your italics are fine, ...

Thanks! It's only 922 words. I need help on how to extend his background without making it sound cheesy. I edited it once already.

Peel

You know you're a writer when you bring notepads and writing instruments on every vacation, even on one day trips to the mall. Just in case. I am soo guilty. ...

I googled "writing", I believe. You see, my sister wrote a poem when she was 12 and she got a letter saying that some people wanted to publish it and ...

Depends on the character, really. If it were important, go ahead, but I probably would take an instant dislike to the character. Unless it was explained. I am a little ...