LilyJamey

I never critiqued a poem before, so bear with me here. If I crit wrong, tell me, ok? Lust pales the darkest minds, to leave the known worlds beside. "beside", ...

8/10. Makes me hungry. I miss my biscuits, their absence is gonna give me permanent writer's block!

Ah, Jason, I see you've met our wonderful *cough* Greeter, Meep(:. I'm Lily, howdy-doody? Liking basketball, surfing and books is so not a strange combo. Try liking football (or soccer, ...

Psh, I hate Vanilla Ice. He ripped off Queen. True. Under Pressure by Queen had the same music and it came first, therefore, VI stole off Queen. Unless they were ...

Banned for not having a title but banning someone who does.

Heh, Meep. You're the one unleashing Fluffy on a new membie. Talk about loony. But that doesn't matter, we're all crazy here. Hi Michael. The name's Lily. LilyJamey. *bursts into ...

Ook, just wanted to ask you: are you posting chapter for chapter, or is this in random order? Because I don't see the connection with the previous one. My hand ...

My.

Hi, Alyssa! Ya know what? I'll call you Lysa. I see you've already made your 2 reviews, which is fast. I need help getting my review count up, so don't ...

8/10.

It's over. So no. The user below me attended a wedding recently.

I suddenly dislike this story, but since I started it, no sense in stopping, right? Give me your harshest reviews. 25 June -Wednesday Fred proposed! O God, I think I ...

Me, of course. Tell me what happened after my chat went out. Between when she said the whole bonny and buxom thing and when you started dancing.

That was noisy. And the bride disappeared halfway through the ceremony.

Forced myself to crit. Constructive criticism is hard when the chapter is good, and it certainly is. Nevertheless! I will do it. “Anne?” she said, the concern evident in every ...