LilyJamey

Hey, Vera, I'm Lily (well, duh) and I'm going to give your first brutalisation critique! :twisted: My comments and nitpickies are in bold. Vesper is 15 fifteen (write out numbers) ...

Hello there! Fine piece you have here. First thing: The piano had been brought there by an older kid that lived in the neighborhood­ during a rowdy party, and chaos ...

Aah, love your siggy. Hey, Midori! I'm Lily, and welcome to the addictive fun site we call YWS! Before I launch into the interrogation warm greetings, let me acquaint you, ...

Short is pretty relative, so it all depends on the people he's with. If the crowd he hangs around are basketballers with almost Yao Ming height, then.. well, you know. ...

I've been slacking shamefully! However, after the recent exam we had, I just couldn't stop myself from coming back. The doodled anecdote on the back of my science paper reminded ...

Ah, I've soooo been waiting for this question! My entire town believes in ghosts, I think. We have at least four well-known haunted houses on just one side of town. ...

You say OMG you don't know what the Gorons mines are?!?!?!?! I'm no like that suprised..., I think "huh?"

You could make the character frown, give a blank look, scratch his/her head, blink repeatedly and say "Huh?" if you want to portray confusion. At least, that's what I would ...

You say Shaun of the Dead, I think rotten apples.

Hey, pudin'! I'm Lily, your reviewer for the evening (or morning, depending on where you are). Pleased to meet you. Firstly, it's a relief to see that you practise proper ...

When I was younger I thought of getting a degree in literature, but after I read Twilight I changed my mind. It seems it doesn't help much. I guess I'll ...

INTP! Introverted - 39% Intuitive - 25% Thinking - 1% Perceiving - 44% Ah. I'm a person of thought and perception.

Wow, Nate, it's gorgeous! Do we ever thank you enough? Love the log-in thingy. It's pwetty.

Well, if I type, there's a much, much higher chance I'll finish whatever I'm working on. So typing for me. I have been known, however, to write full-length anecdotes on ...

6 to 8?! I'll try to get the headmistress to let us listen during assembly. ;) Too bad I can't be there! I'll check the announcement the moment I get ...