LilliantheLegend

I wrote this forever ago for ELA and decided to post it, so tell me what you think. I am a girl with creativity who loves life. I wonder if ...

I love your story! It facinates me greatly! You are very descriptive, gives me a good mental image! You have alot of talent! But do you know the italics arn't ...

I love your poem! It is very expressive and I can connect to it very well! Your words are a master peice! Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward ...

Finally! I made it to chapter seven! I have to say this is one of your best, you put more description in, but you could do better! I kinda like ...

I liked this one too, it's not your best, but its better than most. I give it a 6.5 out of 10. I found some typos though, and even though ...

I love this paragraph too! Agien, it's starting to make more sense, and I'm still very curious, you introduced knew mysters to the reader. Like their parents and Crane. I'm ...

I loved this one! It was eventful and I'm starting to find sense in the story and fill in the missing peices as I read. The loose ends are starting ...

This Chapter was confusing, but ok. It took me forever to read it. I like it better when you space out your paragraphs, easier for the reader to read and ...

Once agien, you made a masterpeice! I like how you gave the reader some backround information so they can get thier thoughts straight. Your writing is eventful and beautiful! I'm ...

I like your story! It has alot of foreshadowing and the curiosity makes me want to run, not walk, to the next chapter and read it. It's good with alot ...

I'll read and write almost any thing or topic, what ever pops into my head really. And about the Narnia thing, I don't really live in a town by a ...

I like your poem very much! I read it and it seems like the words of someone in deep thought, observing the world around them, I love it! It makes ...

I love your poem! I like that you are very discriptive yet you keep some parts to yourself, leaving it with mystery and wonder. The reader now can let there ...

I really like your short story! It's very sweet, and touching. I think it's perfect in almost every way! Keep up the good work! You're very dicriptive of your characters ...

To sum it all up, I love your story! it's great, descriptive, and thrilling! I love how creative you are with this! I usually think the vampire thing is over ...