Lilicia

Hello, my name is Alexandra, but don't ever call me that. Ever.

From that, I gather that the main character is a girl, and that, to escape a terrible situation, she relies on little things to make her happy.That's how I see ...

I also loved this book! It was beautifully written. I haven't read any of her other books yet, but I'm planning to.

Hello! Me again. I'm happy you took my advice! You've rewritten some parts well; the emotions are a lot more defined. I loved this: "Yet nobody knows that his tummy ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! I'm Lilicia *shakes hand* :D On to the review: Nitpicks: I ought to care. He is my husband after all. The promotion was meant to ...

Thanks for the feedback! :)

Hello there! This is an interesting little piece that could lead anywhere - I definitly want to read more. However, it's not perfect. Corrections in red and suggestions in bold: ...

Thanks for the reviews!! I don't often write poems, and it's good to have tips on how to improve. ~Lilicia

I fly quietly with a broken pace, Crushing the drunken bluebells - Which stagger, stutter, under my weight. Together, they fight my aroma of far away smells. I leave them ...

Hi there! I really liked this; your writing flows nicely and the descriptions are good. You want this to be ripped to pieces, so here goes... It pained me too ...

Hey there! I hardly ever review poetry, so sorry if this isn't that great. :) Just one tiny nitpick: And let me breath . *breathe So this is quite a ...

Hello! This continues to be interesting. However, this piece is lacking emotion. It's quite hard to relate to the MC at the moment. That said, this story does have potential, ...

8/10 - it's good, and I like the description - however, the idea is not so original. At first it was a low hum, something that everyone could hear, yet ...

Thanks for the reviews, they helped a lot! I will correct it soon. I might post more of this, when I have more time - and that's a good point ...

He was Adam, she was Evelyn. The jokes lived around them. “Hey, Adam, can I come and visit your garden sometime?” “Eve, you really shouldn’t be eating that apple.” “Oh, ...