Lilicia

This is the beginning of a story I started writing. It's the story of the love between a grandmother and grandaughter. This is just the beginning, so it doesn't come ...

Hi! I liked this - it's very well written. However, there are always the nitpicks... They were so deep in there love It should be ' their love'. But, noone ...

Hi! This is good, but it needs some work. I'll start off with the nit-picks: I scream frantically at the top of my lungs, trying anything to keep my so-called ...

You're not a fail! Don't ever put yourself down like that. Sometimes I get really upset because I think that the reviews I get are too critical, that people can ...

Hi! Lilicia here, please excuse my extreme pickyness this evening! Firstly, this was very interesting and original, I liked it. A very good idea for a story... Now for the ...

Hi Evi, Lilicia here! I owe you a review (thank you so much for reviewing my murderer thing, it really helped!) - so here it is... Firstly, this is amazing, ...

My mother always told me that it is wrong to hurt people, and in a way, I suppose she’s right. It is wrong to shatter lives, break hearts into millions ...

I would grab my family member's hand and tell them to hold onto my best friend. That way, family comes first, but my best friend would be saved too! Ha ...

This is my entry for Amon360's vampire contest. Please tell me honestly what you think, and rip it to shreds while you're at it :D (By the way, if you ...

Hi! Let me start off by saying that this is a piece with a lot of potential, and with a bit of polishing will shine :D Now for the nitpicks: ...

Wow. This is amazing! I'm really freaked out now - I don't think I'll ever touch a doll again! I found no grammar mistakes at all, so I can't do ...

This is an intereting idea, even though it's not so original. I was slightly confused in certain bits, but maybe it will be explained later, seeing as this is just ...

This is my entry for Amon360's vampire contest. Please tell me honestly what you think, and rip it to shreds while you're at it :D Thank you! The thick, endless ...

This is something I started on a while ago - I just wondered whether it's worth continuing. Rip it to shreds, please - it needs it. Badly. :lol: CHAPTER 1 ...

Hello! This story has potential, but first thing's first: grammar. The lack of full stops make the sentences overly long, and difficult to read. Here's an example: Morning is it ...