Lilicia

Hi! This is really good - the descriptions are amazing, and I could see everything perfectly! Yay! :D It was just an attic light bulb hanging in the sky; naked, ...

Hi! I've finally got round to reviewing this! Sorry for the delay :? Firstly, let me say that this is really good. It captured my attention with its orginiality, and ...

I don't know you but welcome back anyway! :)

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Hi! Thanks for the PM! I would have missed this wonderful piece of work otherwise :D This is really good - your writing style has something about it that makes ...

YWS has helped me in so many ways... I've always wanted to write, but whatever I wrote would always go to nothing. I suppose apart from my parents telling me ...

Thank you for all the helpful comments :) I've put the next chapter up, and, if you're interested, reviews would be useful! :D

This is chapter 2 of Silent Chaos, and it needs a lot of work! Critiques are welcome :D The air felt cold on my skin, and the slight breeze that ...

Thanks everyone! :D I'm writing the next part, and should put it up somtime in the next week!

This is somthing I just started. I have a rough idea where I going with this, but I need it to be error-free first! Please help :D The explosion happened ...

This is really good. I couldn't see any mistakes, so well done. Keep on writing! :D

Hi! This is interesting. I'm intruiged. My son chocked on a tear. 'Chocked' should be 'choked'. The other mistakes have already been pointed out,so that's about it! Keep writing, I'd ...

Hi! This was really nice, and even though it was short you portrayed the emotions and descriptions perfectly. The nit-picks were already pointed out, so there's not much else I ...

Hi! This is really good. The prologue really intruiged me, and this chapter's also very interesting. You've got a very good story coming along. It's very original, and even though ...

This is really good! I was captivated by the first few paragraphs. I love your descriptions of his mask, and especially the repetition of 'I used to think he was ...