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Hello there! I haven't done a review in a very long time, so sorry if this is a bit rough. Anyway, I enjoyed this. The story kept me hooked until ...

“Knock knock.” “Who’s there?” the woman replied automatically. “Eddy.” His eyes were completely serious. “Eddy who?” she said. Her voice had become weary; this was the third time he�

Hello! I loved this. It's written really well, and it's amazing how you could get such an idea from that prompt. I was hooked from beginning to end. Just a ...

Hello there! I liked this, you've got some good ideas in here. The fight at the beginning was good; the way you wrote it shows the reader Callie's situation though ...

Hello there! This is a beautiful story; it's short and powerful, and very sad. I love the subtleness; how you say things with really saying them, like when Rosie's mum ...

Hi there! This is an interesting piece - I hope you're planning on making it into something longer. You have some lovely descriptions in there, especially in the first paragraph. ...

Hello! I read the first part which had some good reviews, so I decided to review this part straight away. It was a nice read; well written and interesting. It ...

Hey! So I know this is quite rough, I've just written it and am planning to make it the first chapter of a longer story. I'd be grateful for any ...

Hi there! I really liked this, especially the beginning. The prologue dragged me in straight away, and the start of the first chapter intruiged me too: someone picking bunches of ...

Hi there! So, this is a good story, Maryann is a very intersting character. I liked the suspense you built up of the intruder in her closet, and the twist ...

Hi there! I really liked this, it's a change from the usual. I didn't find it contrived or stupid at all, it was actually very gripping. Just a few things: ...

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Hi there! This is a nice little story about your love for your mother, very sweet. Just a few comments and suggestions (corrections in red, suggestions in bold): Do I ...

Hey there! This is sweet, and the style is definitly appropriate. Just a few nitpicks: The other animals didn’t mind, because there was plenty of food for everyone. I think ...

Hey there! I liked this: it's interesting how you made the main character someone with a lot of faults about him - it makes the story realistic. I also like ...