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Re: Life
Like I said before this was amazing...and way better than any english paper that I've ever written! I don't think I could have survived with only three characters, as you ...
Apr 15, 2007 -
Re: Matthew (violence, language, and drug use)
This was amazing! I loved how even though the demon baby thing was a little cliche you made it unique and put your own twist on it. Your transitions were ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: The Trinity Test
Honestly, I thought this was kind of boring. There didn't seem to be much happening except two guys talking about a project that was never really described. I had to ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Gabrion Skies
This was amazing! It was so much different than I thought it was going to be when I started reading it and it surprised me. I loved how she learned ...
Mar 20, 2007 -
Re: The Other Side of Eden C2
Wow, this was amazing. I really like how you describe Andrew's problem with so much detail, it helped me understand what he was feeling and why it mattered so much ...
Feb 21, 2007 -
Re: Prolouge for my Book
First off, I agree with the others that this should be the first chapter and not a prologue. I really like how he's worrying about his parents reaction to his ...
Dec 10, 2006 -
Re: A Beginning....one of many
I do the same thing (write beginnings but no ends) all the time. I get bored with it. I thought this was a good beginning, but could be a little ...
Sep 23, 2006