LilacsandLilies

In every thought in every mind a memory is held inside. Do you recall that certain place, that special time, that single face? The sound of raindrops on the leaves ...

First off, I agree with the others that this should be the first chapter and not a prologue. I really like how he's worrying about his parents reaction to his ...

Thanks. All of your posts were really informative and i'll try to fix it up. Sorry about posting twice, by the way, I was a little confused about what I ...

Prologue Deep beneath the parched, dusty surface of Scientific Research Facility Number 51's outer bounderies an entity long hidden from the world stirred within its confines. As a result of ...

I liked it. It's different then other things that I'm used to reading. It was a little confusing at the beginning but after I read more I got it.

I do the same thing (write beginnings but no ends) all the time. I get bored with it. I thought this was a good beginning, but could be a little ...