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  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Bittersweet

    Alright here's the next chapter if anyone's reading this far. This is one of my favorites for some reason so I hope whomever is reading this likes it. Chapter 8 ...

    May 20, 2007
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Bittersweet

    I don't know if anyone is reading this but I'm going to keep posting the chapters anyway. This chapter is less exciting, so sorry about that, but here it is. ...

    Apr 30, 2007
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Bittersweet

    It's been a while, but here's the next chapter anyway. Chapter 6 Nothing had changed. And yet everything was different. My world was caving in; one giant avalanche of ice ...

    Apr 23, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Life

    Like I said before this was amazing...and way better than any english paper that I've ever written! I don't think I could have survived with only three characters, as you ...

    Apr 15, 2007
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Matthew (violence, language, and drug use)

    This was amazing! I loved how even though the demon baby thing was a little cliche you made it unique and put your own twist on it. Your transitions were ...

    Apr 10, 2007
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Bittersweet

    Yes the later chapters are going to answer any and all questions anyone may have about nightlings and my vampires. If anyone has any specific questions just pm me or ...

    Apr 6, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Your Angel

    I liked this a lot. It was really soulful and spiritual, I thought, and it seemed like it had a lot of meaning. L&L

    Apr 6, 2007
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Bittersweet

    Chapter 5 I had run out of ways to keep myself busy and I was starting to think again. I hadn’t slept the rest of the night so I was ...

    Mar 30, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Trinity Test

    Honestly, I thought this was kind of boring. There didn't seem to be much happening except two guys talking about a project that was never really described. I had to ...

    Mar 22, 2007
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Gabrion Skies

    This was amazing! It was so much different than I thought it was going to be when I started reading it and it surprised me. I loved how she learned ...

    Mar 20, 2007
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Bittersweet

    Chapter 4 The last week had been long and lonely and I was definitely looking forward to the weekend. Although it wouldn’t be any less boring than school or any ...

    Mar 19, 2007
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Bittersweet

    Chapter 3 It was noon and I hadnt spoken a single word all day. I was on my way to the cafeteria, dreading sitting alone almost more than I was ...

    Mar 2, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Other Side of Eden C2

    Wow, this was amazing. I really like how you describe Andrew's problem with so much detail, it helped me understand what he was feeling and why it mattered so much ...

    Feb 21, 2007
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Bittersweet

    Thanks for your comment. Here's the next chapter. Chapter 2 I sat staring out the car window watching the rain stream across, long rivulets running in front of my eyes. ...

    Feb 21, 2007
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Bittersweet

    Prologue A dark shape crouched in front of me, not five feet away, barring my path. I could see its unfamiliar human face, beautiful and deadly, its human hands, shaking ...

    Feb 15, 2007


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