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Re: Bittersweet
Alright here's the next chapter if anyone's reading this far. This is one of my favorites for some reason so I hope whomever is reading this likes it. Chapter 8 ...
May 20, 2007 -
Re: Bittersweet
I don't know if anyone is reading this but I'm going to keep posting the chapters anyway. This chapter is less exciting, so sorry about that, but here it is. ...
Apr 30, 2007 -
Re: Bittersweet
It's been a while, but here's the next chapter anyway. Chapter 6 Nothing had changed. And yet everything was different. My world was caving in; one giant avalanche of ice ...
Apr 23, 2007 -
Re: Life
Like I said before this was amazing...and way better than any english paper that I've ever written! I don't think I could have survived with only three characters, as you ...
Apr 15, 2007 -
Re: Matthew (violence, language, and drug use)
This was amazing! I loved how even though the demon baby thing was a little cliche you made it unique and put your own twist on it. Your transitions were ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: Bittersweet
Yes the later chapters are going to answer any and all questions anyone may have about nightlings and my vampires. If anyone has any specific questions just pm me or ...
Apr 6, 2007 -
Re: Your Angel
I liked this a lot. It was really soulful and spiritual, I thought, and it seemed like it had a lot of meaning. L&L
Apr 6, 2007 -
Re: Bittersweet
Chapter 5 I had run out of ways to keep myself busy and I was starting to think again. I hadn’t slept the rest of the night so I was ...
Mar 30, 2007 -
Re: The Trinity Test
Honestly, I thought this was kind of boring. There didn't seem to be much happening except two guys talking about a project that was never really described. I had to ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Gabrion Skies
This was amazing! It was so much different than I thought it was going to be when I started reading it and it surprised me. I loved how she learned ...
Mar 20, 2007 -
Re: Bittersweet
Chapter 4 The last week had been long and lonely and I was definitely looking forward to the weekend. Although it wouldn’t be any less boring than school or any ...
Mar 19, 2007 -
Re: Bittersweet
Chapter 3 It was noon and I hadnt spoken a single word all day. I was on my way to the cafeteria, dreading sitting alone almost more than I was ...
Mar 2, 2007 -
Re: The Other Side of Eden C2
Wow, this was amazing. I really like how you describe Andrew's problem with so much detail, it helped me understand what he was feeling and why it mattered so much ...
Feb 21, 2007 -
Re: Bittersweet
Thanks for your comment. Here's the next chapter. Chapter 2 I sat staring out the car window watching the rain stream across, long rivulets running in front of my eyes. ...
Feb 21, 2007 -
Re: Bittersweet
Prologue A dark shape crouched in front of me, not five feet away, barring my path. I could see its unfamiliar human face, beautiful and deadly, its human hands, shaking ...
Feb 15, 2007
