Lightsong

So basically, Karliah is going to be Do'amha's saviour. Neat. I'm intrigued with the other slave, whom someone has raped. Why is she wanted by this new slaver? I've read ...

How many people know about this plan? If it is just the master thief and the slaver whom he serves, it is going to be difficult. It is unlikely for ...

Also, don't be shy to ask through Private Message (PM), or chat box the reviewers who do not have their own review threads. I advise you choosing those who are ...

I suck at researching, hence the topic. My story revolves around Gary and Will, a couple of lovers with the latter being a successful theatre actor. Will's ability to act ...

Well, Lareine and Rosendorn seems to have covered the issue about whom to take, so I'm going to put my two cents on how the mission as well as the ...

I will add another note on this subject. These words are indeed efficient in describing the tone and way dialogue is said, but they can also distract readers from the ...

Well, I'll contribute some cultural fact gained from experience. In my country, boys bullying girls physically are rarely heard, and it is likely because of the fact that even the ...

Title: The Blessed, the Cursed, and the Wielders Genre: Fantasy Description: The Discovery of Magic With the discoveries of magical triggers, magic was learned. Since the amount of triggers were ...

I didn't know the exact meaning of filler so I looked it up and LOLed to what I found. noun 1. a thing put in a space or container to ...

Well, I would say, 'Throw in interesting events! Make conflicts!' because that's the easy way to develop characters, since they would be making hard decisions and change over time. Also, ...

Yeah, I think you should start with Brianna. From her perspective, you can introduce the conflict and all.

Title: The Silent Speaker Legacy Genre: Fantasy Description: Emergence of Magic When King Navak attempted to create a portal between Earth and Heaven during *Enel, an error was made. The ...

Title: The Silent Speaker Legacy Genre: Fantasy Description: History of Vikter (previously known as Ignus Iriel) Father said the family started all the way back from the twelfth passing of ...

Ooh, battle scene! Me likey. I'm not an expert of this, but I do make some battle scenes once in awhile. What I would do is that I'm not going ...

The second one. It has colours, which makes it livelier than the rest. It still has that casual feeling to it like the rest, but I think the typography can ...