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Re: I Need A Lot Of Advice...
Hey, BeTheChange! Interesting idea you have there! :D Hmm, let me see... First of all, I don't find a solid plot for this, since you only mention Pennington as being ...
Mar 19, 2018 -
Re: Why does this hook suck so bad
Um... can you show us the said sentence so that we can help you with it? ^^'
Feb 15, 2018 -
Re: First person vs. Third person
Since you specifically say the story would focus on only one character throughout, I think both perspectives are equally effective. What differs is how do you want to approach the ...
Feb 8, 2018 -
Re: Romantic Relationships
Two words: cute moments! Well, for me, that's how I keep shipping a couple. You make the fact that two people are a couple still interesting by showing how they ...
Jan 29, 2018 -
Re: Converting thoughts to poem
This is too late, but I wanna give some input nonetheless. Write everything down first even if you think you can't find the right word. This is a problem of ...
Jan 26, 2018 -
Re: Project constellation
This is a bit late and I wonder why I missed this topic... Anyway. I seriously think this is a great idea! I love anything to do with the constellations, ...
Jan 19, 2018 -
Re: Reading and writing influences
Hmm, I agree with you. I understand that as we read more and more books, they'd influence our writing, but I don't think it's to the extend where it affects ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Discussion: Formatting Ideas/Notes
Hmm, reading other posts, I'm quite embarassed with my methods, which is... I just write it! :D Well, not exactly like that. Usually, when I have an interesting world building ...
Jan 14, 2018 -
Re: Anybody know how to write 'simple'?
Hey! I'm sorry I post this so late, but I hope it comes off as helpful! Anyway, I think when it comes to writing it's important to make sure everything ...
Jan 5, 2018 -
Re: Using old device for writing
Hey, tristovee, I was interested with what you said there. Tapak Suci? Are you using Malay language as your first language, by any chance? If you do, me too! :D ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: How to write a torture scene
The general feedback of what kind of emotion/reaction tortured people have would be a mix of fear and sadness. And these two aspects can be exaggerated since the concept of ...
Dec 8, 2017 -
Re: Hey, writing about a time-period.
There are so many resources you can find about the time period. If you prefer to read, then historical fiction novels are fine. As someone who loves fantasy novel, I ...
Dec 8, 2017 -
Re: Book 1: Dancer of the Fire Blade
Natural Language/Spells Serra-blessed Spells Advanced Acceleration Regeneration Serris, cesat micimia. Bleeze, mivat miderizia. Bice mirakizia, bice gentis. Riti daris chengis et daris bifa. Risti dar
Sep 20, 2017 -
Re: Megrim's Critique Crucible
This is interesting, I'll give it a try! :P CRUCIBLE REQUEST Your Name: Lightsong Title of Work Reviewed: The Seventh Sister (Part 1) Type of Work Reviewed: Short story Link ...
Sep 7, 2017 -
Re: Book 1: Dancer of the Fire Blade
Felaris Ashav While Felaris does have an important role in terminating the experiment project, her point of view is the least among the three. She had a close relationship with ...
Aug 30, 2017
