Lightsong

@lostthought: Lol, I'm thinking where did you get the 'Stop the contest He/She said!' xD

Pick the one you most comfortable. That way, it'd be easy for you to plan its beginning, middle, and ending. Have these three roughly sketched, and start writing. If you ...

I have to agree with @Meandbooks. I personally don't see how 'he/she said' makes a piece lacking or dull. First of all, for me, the most important aspect of dialogue ...

Everything happened not the way I expected it to. In this subchapter, I had other plan for Merah and Scarlet, but when I was writing Scarlet’s position as a general, ...

Anyway! I'm thinking of making character naming info right now, which is for the lights whose names you aren't familiar with (and might think I made them up). :) Sunglow ...

Ohmegerd, I finished the latest subchapter in one day! I feel like if I keep continue like this, I can finish two chapters a week! :D Well, I certainly used ...

@Pretzelstick: Someone who's interested! Thanks for the comment. :D Night is now in my place, actually, so have hoped there for a moment. xD Hope you'll enjoy the reading!

Finally! I've finished the third subchapter for the current subchapter. It marks the end of Azhar's point of view, although I would bring him up after a few chapters later. ...

The title is self-explanatory. I've started writing a novel titled Bad Lights, Good Lights, and am going with a steady pace right now. However, the reviews on the chapters are ...

This is awesome. I lack in imagery department, so I'm so going to follow this thread. Want moar! xD I especially like the one with mouse and knife since it ...

I always go with FP Past. It's been drilled inside me by my teacher with the simple logic that if we told someone a story we've experienced before, of course ...

Yeah, my main advice is to make the villain not just a human, but feels as one. Here, you've pretty much laid out a basic profile of her, complete with ...

Torch sounds good, but semantically, I can't imagine your bird to resemble/or be closer to it. I like Wildfire in your full list because not only it suggests the bird ...

Well, novels with multiple PoVs are of course common out there. Brandon Sanderson in his The Way of Kings play with many PoVs, even including characters that aren't main just ...

Before suggesting what kind of accent, I've to ask: Is it necessary? Accents show us the origin of one's place, and that kind of importance or influence is needed to ...