Lightsong

I'm not sure about boats, but here's a good place to start .

There's actually a lot going on here . ._. But the gist should be: - flashback, then present time (checked) - Rila tried to kill Gael, but failed - tried ...

For those who've reviewed/read it, you'd know what is it about. If you don't, check out my portfolio ! :D But basically, it was about Rila carrying out this assassination ...

(spoiler alert) For chapter 22.2, Gael will meet Haka's parents before he goes to Felaris's room and learns more about Haka's people's culture. He will also clear things up with ...

Spoilerts alert. Revising the reveals I had planned: - Haifei is Xesar and that's why he tells Ilami all of this. He wants to test whether she's suitable to be ...

Ilami XieZhi, protagonist of Dancer of the Fire Blade What do they want? A lot of things, but the major ones concerning the plot: truth and justice. You see, Ilami ...

Dancer of the Fire Blade has been compared with Harry Potter and Avatar: The Last Airbender simply because of how significant number four is in it. -_-' Here are the ...

Hey, just here to give my comment. :D From what I read and correct me if I'm wrong, the story will be character-driven. It doesn't really focus much on plot ...

Why your prose is so good, I can't even. Like. The feels, man. The intensity. The sudden desire to have the king dead (he's so eww I mean like wth). ...

Daaaayyyyuuuummmmm, love this so much. Many intriguing elements you have here. Queen and her shadow are likeable characters, and their relationship is wonderful. So I'm guessing we're waiting for the ...

Notes About Chapter 1.1 So... after planning for the chapters and deciding Halia's PoV would be used in the first chapter, I used Sofeas's instead. And I think this is ...

Chapter 1.1: Sofeas

Aaaahhhh I love the last two lines! Not much to say about this part, except that the princess really has a strong voice here, quite likeable, and has an opposite ...

Spoilers I honestly think the novel is getting at the last part -- after the test, Ilami and Gael will have the equipments needed to fight Xestari and Father, as ...

Side Characters Sofeas Brightstar The middle sibling of the three, Sofeas is trained to be as demure and polite as the other Nightwhisper's girls. That being said, inherent in her ...