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Re: Poetry Exchange August
I've been persuaded. Sign me up! :D
Jul 26, 2016 -
Re: Who Are The Authors/Poets You Despise?
The Host is definitely better. I like Meyer because of it. Haven't read the Twilight series.
Jul 26, 2016 -
Re: Title Feedback
Seems fantastical at first glance, but upon pondering, the title might as well be a metaphor related to one's life (although the plural form of moon make it read less ...
Jul 20, 2016 -
Re: Title Feedback
The title is light, in the sense that I'm not expecting a deep reading, more to an enjoyable one with funny, heart-warming moments. It can be any genre, though I'm ...
Jun 30, 2016 -
Re: Poetry Wars
Username: Lightsong Guest Judge?: Nope, I'm biased. xD Poem Title: The Piece of Technology Copy of Poem: Teenagers everywhere had the piece of technology in their hands—it's like holding their ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Who Are The Authors/Poets You Despise?
I personally like the way Veronica Roth writes her novel. Divergent is superb, Insurgent is still okay, but Allegiant is a total no-no. The plot and character development derail, but ...
Jun 3, 2016 -
Re: Title Feedback
I'm not sure. The title suggests a kind of madness, but the word choice itself isn't really interesting. My interest on what 'absolute absurdity' is isn't enough for me to ...
May 26, 2016 -
Re: Title Feedback
Definitely intriguing. The title can mean either way--perhaps a witch has a baby, and this cradle she has is for him. Or it can be really that it's the witch's ...
May 25, 2016 -
Re: Metaphorical Madness
The vacuum cleaner's battery had ran out when he needed to clean his dusty room, something he didn't consider when he used his entire month payment to buy it; in ...
May 22, 2016 -
Re: To Catch an Heiress by Julia Quinn
To Catch an Heiress is a novel written by Julia Quinn. It revolved around Caroline Trent, an heiress who ran away from her guardian to escape a devastating future, only ...
May 22, 2016 -
Re: Title Feedback
The title is definitely intriguing, as I haven't heard a school without name. At initial thought, I don't think the meaning is as direct as that--perhaps the school focuses on ...
May 15, 2016 -
Re: Character Creation
Danina, a sixteen years-old brunette, comes from a wealthy family, the Mars family. She lives in the extravagant city in Mars, and is expected to lead the family's nuclear business ...
Apr 29, 2016 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
8/10. I like it. Very intriguing indeed, because it's something about religion or spiritual thing, which I'm always glad to explore, and something else magical/supernatural-ish with the use of 'mark'.
Apr 26, 2016 -
Re: Title Feedback
Am pretty sure it's about something fantasy or supernatural, although 'fiends' being a metaphor would be quite interesting too. Overall, it's a pretty unusual title given the contrast of connotations ...
Mar 29, 2016 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
(It seems like my critique is turned against me -_-) 5/10 I... am not sure. Some of me is intrigued on what liwan means but the other argues about starting ...
Mar 28, 2016
