Lightsong

6/10 Hmm, this sentence makes me think. And i don't lile thinking, so I want more explanation regarding this. Does it trigger my curiosity? Yes. Is it impressive? Not really. ...

I can't keep these ideas unwritten.

5/10 This sentence welcomes many interpretations - some would say the character is thirsty, while others would say she is tired of her life, or busy schedule, and just wants ...

It was a delusional concept. It gave the idea that natural disasters were no more in the world we lived in - tsunami, earthquake, or wind storm were impossible to ...

Boring

To die is to escape the prison of reality, but to live is to destroy the said prison. (Totally have no idea how to change my thoughts into a poem ...

HP all the way. Treatments on Muggles and goblins or house-elves scream out the issue of discrimination - how can you guys say it's childish? Plus, HP is full with ...

Hot

Not wanting to put the blondie in an uneasy state, Laura gave her her widest smile, her eyes sparkling. "I'm fine, of course! How about you?" she said. She looked ...

Awesome

... and to remember every detail of it was just too painful, so she shook her head, hoping the nightmarish memory left her with peace. She focused on the matter ...

This is awesome. I've not read a single novel for a long time, this thread might have just ended that! :D

She tried to look around for it in her room of the Writers for Sell Hotel, but she just realized that the door was opened, and frowned.

6/10 It's short, but it can grab the attention of the readers since there are many things left unsaid. In terms of grammar, I can see none here. --- There ...