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Re: First person present vs past.
I always go with FP Past. It's been drilled inside me by my teacher with the simple logic that if we told someone a story we've experienced before, of course ...
Dec 14, 2015 -
Re: Read and Review!
@MadWriter7: Request's on hold. ^^' I'm following another novel and currently busy, so after I've done reviewing that one, I'll try to review this one. Maybe I'll occasionally review this ...
Dec 14, 2015 -
Re: Tips on creating Villains?
Yeah, my main advice is to make the villain not just a human, but feels as one. Here, you've pretty much laid out a basic profile of her, complete with ...
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: Pompadour's Review Parlour
Hey! Please review this subchapter of mine, Thanks! :D Just saw the rules. Sorry. I cancel my request.
Dec 11, 2015 -
Re: Naming help
Torch sounds good, but semantically, I can't imagine your bird to resemble/or be closer to it. I like Wildfire in your full list because not only it suggests the bird ...
Dec 1, 2015 -
Re: Playing with POV points of view
Well, novels with multiple PoVs are of course common out there. Brandon Sanderson in his The Way of Kings play with many PoVs, even including characters that aren't main just ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: Accents
Before suggesting what kind of accent, I've to ask: Is it necessary? Accents show us the origin of one's place, and that kind of importance or influence is needed to ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: Featured Member for Nov 29th - Dec 13th: Lightsong!
Oh. My. God. o.o Thanks! :D
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Plot Bunny Adoption!
Write a story including a character who is an seemingly sweet old lady but is a cannibal. I'm adopting this bunny.
Nov 28, 2015 -
Re: What would your characters do?
"Disneyland. I've been to local theme parks but never Disneyland. It'd be fun!" - Sarah, Bad Lights, Good Lights There is a giant robotic tarantula in front of you and ...
Nov 28, 2015 -
Re: The Last Man Standing: Round II
*take a sip of tea and die*
Nov 27, 2015 -
Re: I want to read your novel!
Please review As an intermission chapter, the focus is on Flaxen's light companion, a guy Merah found in school who could run faster than human could. :D Thank you!
Nov 27, 2015 -
Re: Novel Reviews
Please review Thanks! :D
Nov 27, 2015 -
Re: "Bad books" for children
What about works that ignore the restrictions? I mean, aren't banned books are ones like that? I don't think banning is entirely bad; I mean, there are books that have ...
Nov 26, 2015 -
Re: Deanie's Reviewing Business II
Please review this subchapter, The plot is simple, really, in which selected teenagers become light companions and fight against the bad lights. :D
Nov 26, 2015
