Lightsong

Sorry for the late reply, @Rubric. Alright, so as far as I understand it, you've defined Violence [we''ll capitalise it for clarity] as "violence not sanctioned by Islam". You've then ...

*blows dust on topic* ;)

Welcome, sleepless! Hope you'll enjoy it being here - there'd be tons of reviewers who could review your works and give advices for improvement. :D

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I NEED THIS. These are my reviews for R.E.D. February 1. 2. 3. - Dodge Me 1.1 4. - Glass & Ashes 2/2 ; - Warm Meals and Dead Bodies: ...

Please review Thanks! :D

@Meandbooks

@lostthought: Lol, I'm thinking where did you get the 'Stop the contest He/She said!' xD

Pick the one you most comfortable. That way, it'd be easy for you to plan its beginning, middle, and ending. Have these three roughly sketched, and start writing. If you ...

I have to agree with @Meandbooks. I personally don't see how 'he/she said' makes a piece lacking or dull. First of all, for me, the most important aspect of dialogue ...

I will take advantage. Please review Thanks! :)

I love having books. Touching them in intimate ways, flirting at them lovingly, and allowing myself to get aroused by their smells - I better stop. ;) That being said, ...

Congrats! :D

Cursing - well, it's a tool. A difficult one. Someone cursing has already spoken volume of his character, and that's all what it serves as. A device to show us ...

I've been waiting for this. :D Please review Chapter Seven (you can review each part of it or summarize it at the end of the chapter - I don't mind)!