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Lightsong

  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    The title is definitely intriguing, as I haven't heard a school without name. At initial thought, I don't think the meaning is as direct as that--perhaps the school focuses on ...

    May 15, 2016
  • Research Archives Re: New Idea That Might Destroy My Novel

    I've been working with my novel, Bad Lights, Good Lights for a while. I've a nice idea of the characters and the world building and the general plot. I'm currently ...

    May 14, 2016
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: The Power of Words

    Well... consider this. If you don't react to the word floozy, would you think the word has any power to you? I mean, one would lean to the assumption that ...

    May 13, 2016
  • Research Archives Re: Immature voice...?

    Hmm, immature voice. Interesting. Perhaps you can give us a bit of an example of your writing that is deemed immature? Because immature in prose isn't necessarily a bad thing. ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Research Archives Re: Writing Longer/Slower

    As long as there are many events occurring in your story, you would be fine. There are things that need to be included in the events, so you need to ...

    May 12, 2016
  • WRFF Archive Re: Read and Review!

    It's open! Those who don't get their pieces reviewed, it's because I choose not to for some reasons. - Two slots open -

    May 9, 2016
  • OOC Archive Re: Feather DT

    Alright! I'm going to start my post soon, and I'll insert it into the WFP first to allow you to add in the Crow Man part. Hopefully I can buy ...

    May 5, 2016
  • OOC Archive Re: Feather DT

    I'll be waiting for the NPC post! c:

    May 4, 2016
  • Research Archives Re: Imagery and writing good

    Well... according to dictionary , imagery means 'figurative description or illustration; rhetorical images collectively'. Note that it is either figurative description or illustration, which means ima

    May 3, 2016
  • Research Archives Re: Imagery and writing good

    I'd try to help. As an addition, here's how spoiler works: [spoiler.]insert words[/spoiler.] Just remove the dots I've put there. Anyway! Their auras were… incredible for lack of a better ...

    May 2, 2016
  • Research Re: Writing battle scenes?

    Ooh, battle scene! Me likey. I'm not an expert of this, but I do make some battle scenes once in awhile. What I would do is that I'm not going ...

    May 2, 2016
  • OOC Archive Re: Feather DT

    I'm guessing Fallen is the only spot left? If so, I want to grab it please. I know the big four elements are off-limit, but does it extend to certain ...

    May 1, 2016
  • OOC Archive Re: Feather DT

    Can I join? c:

    May 1, 2016
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Powerful Pen; Immortal Ink [NaPoWriMo 2016]

    #13: Revenge Revenge awakes when someone places a stone in front of you the moment you make a step, and fall. It's your energy source to rise, despite your bleeding ...

    Apr 30, 2016
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Creation

    Danina, a sixteen years-old brunette, comes from a wealthy family, the Mars family. She lives in the extravagant city in Mars, and is expected to lead the family's nuclear business ...

    Apr 29, 2016


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