Lightsong

Thanks, you guys! :D Yehuda Devir's Challenge So basically the challenge is to redraw the pic he has made and yours might get shown in his story. I failed terribly ...

Why your prose is so good, I can't even. Like. The feels, man. The intensity. The sudden desire to have the king dead (he's so eww I mean like wth). ...

Daaaayyyyuuuummmmm, love this so much. Many intriguing elements you have here. Queen and her shadow are likeable characters, and their relationship is wonderful. So I'm guessing we're waiting for the ...

Carina: Malaysians learn British English, though students might confuse British Eng. and American Eng. since the majority of English novels in bookstores is from the US. That being said, our ...

6/10 Description-wise, this is excellent. It's easily imaginable. However, as a first sentence, I don't think it has the x-factor enough to grip reader's attention. It suggests the follow-up would ...

We Malaysians call it koo-pon, and saying it as kyoo-pon can make you come across as being pretentious, like you're trying to hard to sound English. xD

Notes About Chapter 1.1 So... after planning for the chapters and deciding Halia's PoV would be used in the first chapter, I used Sofeas's instead. And I think this is ...

Chapter 1.1: Sofeas

Aaaahhhh I love the last two lines! Not much to say about this part, except that the princess really has a strong voice here, quite likeable, and has an opposite ...

Sorry guys, I have to drop out from this. I don't have the passion for this as much as I did at the start.

Hi, are you still following my novel? :)

Hey, I wanna change to be a warrior, please and thank you. :P

Spoilers I honestly think the novel is getting at the last part -- after the test, Ilami and Gael will have the equipments needed to fight Xestari and Father, as ...

Side Characters Sofeas Brightstar The middle sibling of the three, Sofeas is trained to be as demure and polite as the other Nightwhisper's girls. That being said, inherent in her ...

Antagonists (Major Spoilers) Razes Surevictor Razes is a cunning man, adept in business and charming women. His taste of an ideal female, however, is disturbing. He lusts on young girls ...